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Friday, April 24, 2020
Whanau tasks Paper Airoplane challenge
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Hi Elsha
ReplyDeleteThat's a great challenge that you, Quinn and George competed in! Did you make your own paper planes or follow instructions from the internet like we did for instructional writing? What do you think made your plane fly the greatest distance?
Katrina
Hey Katrina!Thanks for commenting!
ReplyDeleteWe didn't follow instructions to make our planes. We just knew how to make them! But I think my plane was fastest because of the way I made it. It had a pointier end and was verythin on the bottom.
Elsha
I really love the way you've told the whole story, Elsha. You've given us all the details of what happened that day, and it made for a really interesting story. Your plane definitely went the furthest by far, I wonder if your previous experience in the instructional writing exercise earlier this year helped with your design?
ReplyDeleteHey Mum! Thanks for commenting! Yeah the insturctional writing helped a bit I think because thats how I learnt to make a plane. But maybe I can just fly planes well!
ReplyDeleteElsha