Baby- Builders

Kia ora Koutou! Thank you for reading my blog today I am going to share with you my paragraph from the film partly cloudy. In our chunk, we had to include one rhetorical question, one prepositional phrase, and one hyphen. If you you don know what one is, here is what they are.

If you haven seen the film here it is:

The chunk I had to write about was 1:05 seconds into the film to 1:27. Here is what I wrote:

Up in the long blanket of bright blue sky, there was a jungle of clouds, but not just any clouds, baby-builder clouds. These clouds created babies of all sorts, human, dog, cat, chicks and more. One cloud named Misty created a Caramel brown puppy, but the puppy was so bouncy Misty had to create a bone so it would be quiet!  The cloud above Misty made a Baby Boy. This cloud was a girl and had three big buns in a line on her head. The baby cried so much The cloud had to make a football and a helmet to make it happy.Then the stalk got ready to fly away and deliver it. Will the baby make it home safely?

I hope you liked it. If you think I should change something, please tell me!!  What do you think happened after the end of the film?

Bad vs Good blog comments!

This week, I partnered up with Zoe and we  have been learning about what makes a good blog comment vs what makes a bad blog comment. We learnt that a blog comment should include the following:

• Positive sentence

• Thoughtful sentence

• Helpful sentence

• Name at the end

Here is a google drawing showing our learning about what makes a good blog comment

We learnt that bad comments don't include the following:

• Positive sentence

• Helpful sentence

• Thoughtful sentence

Did you like our blog and learn something new from it?