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Monday, August 26, 2019
Elsha's fantastic blog about writing
This Term for Silent writing, we made an S.U.W (Silent uninterrupted writing) Doc. In this Doc, we would write the date of the day we started the story, then write a random story about something. The date I started mine, was 13.2.19. My title was, A Magical Holiday. The main characters in my story were, Queen, King, Sophie, Cupcake, Sprinkles, and the Trolls. Here is a summery of my story.
Sophie was on a walk, and she saw a sparkle. Behind a bush, were the sparkle was, stood 7 fairies! The fairies took Sophie to fairyland and there, told her she was needed in fairy land. Sophie got given a necklace, that casts spells, and helps the fairies in fairy land to lock up the trolls that are destroying fairyland!
Here is a link to my full story
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Before you click the link, do you think Sophie will save fairyland? Or do you think she will ruin fairyland?
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